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SG_lion LV7
发表于 10-7-2011 15:29:35
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本帖最后由 SG_lion 于 10-7-2011 15:30 编辑
WenJiaXin 发表于 10-7-2011 14:34 
Thanks for your heartfelt amendments which have obviously showcased your profound English backgrou ...
Thanks for your heartfelt amendments which have obviously showcased your profound English background. Frankly, prudential comments is intelligent method to avoid dispute among people in a special circumstance. Nevertheless, Chinese counterparts never compromise with other nations when it refers to the core benefits. Therefore, Chinese netizens are get annonyed with such snide remarks and their common reflection directly reflect patriotism spirit and a country's cohesiveness. I believe you still remember the case which one Chinese netizen unpardonable judgement to your national core benefits. As a result, he was investigated by policemen. Former Minister Mentor Lee Kuan Yeo once said young Chinese people become more aggressive compared with old generation with support of ecomomic, military and diplomatic power. More specifically, Old generation more value peaceful lives due largely to suffering Korean War, Culture Revolution, The Vietnam War... while Young generation not. Therefore, FMM suggests USA needs to deploy military power in Asia Pacific in oder to balance the power. Again, I am not sure whether you are heard 80% Chinese young netizens reach a consensus to suggest Beijing should fight with Hanoi. Please pardon me if I judge it subjectively.
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'prudential' (to be replaced by...) prudent
pru·dent (pr d nt) adj. 1. Wise in handling practical matters; exercising good judgment or common sense.
2. Careful in regard to one's own interests; provident.
3. Careful about one's conduct; circumspect.
adv prudently
n prudence
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'a country's cohesiveness' (more suitable to use...) solidarity
sol·i·dar·i·ty (s l -d r -t ) n. A union of interests, purposes, or sympathies among members of a group; fellowship of responsibilities and interests
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'I believe you still remember the case which one Chinese netizen unpardonable judgement to your national core benefits.' (amendments...)
I believe that you should be able to recall the case whereby one Chinese netizen passed seditious remarks and held your country with contempt.
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'Former Minister Mentor Lee Kuan Yeo once said young Chinese people become more aggressive compared with old generation with support of ecomomic, military and diplomatic power. ' (amendments...)
Former Minister Mentor Lee Kuan Yew once spoke about the increasing aggression of the younger Chinese as compared to the older generation. This was due to the progression of economic and military power.
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'More specifically, Old generation more value peaceful lives due largely to suffering Korean War, Culture Revolution, The Vietnam War... while Young generation not.' (amendments...)
More specifically, the older generation value peace largely due to their insufferable experience with war and revolution while the younger generation had yet to experience the same abomination.
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'Again, I am not sure whether you are heard 80% Chinese young netizens reach a consensus to suggest Beijing should fight with Hanoi. Please pardon me if I judge it subjectively.'
Again, I am unsure if you have heard that 80% of the younger Chinese netizens agreed that Beijing should carry out military measures against Hanoi. Please pardon me if my judgement is biased.
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Honestly speaking, I am very flattered. Your progression is superb. Post by post, you get more understandable.
I can recommend a website that will help you. http://www.thefreedictionary.com/
This is an online dictionary totally in English. If you want to truely improve, you cannot use the 2 languages in tandem. Allow English to course through your thoughts and put away Chinese for the time being. It will help you tremendously if you avoid the usage of Chinese when learning English.
Do you read English books? Contemporary literature or famous timeless classics? Reading will help to build up your vocabulary. Listen to BBC radio and watch movies in English (preferably subtitled in English as well) It will help you to improve your listening comprehension. Force yourself into a corner whereby you see no way to survive if you don't understand English. That was how some Chinese who came to Singapore barely knowing any English eventually survived and aced their exams. I met one young lad from Chongqing during an event hosted by a leading German automotive product manufacturer. Although he had an accent, we didn't have any problems understanding each other.
I have little to add on regarding your views on the political issues. It is absolutely your prerogative as a Chinese (I hope my assumption is correct) to decide if war should break out between China and Vietnam. But as a by-stander, I think it is certainly far from being profitable for anyone to have countries nearby waging war on each other. This thoroughly affects the economic progression and war has its social implications as well. War, by far, has never benefitted anyone.
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